once a boy name Tommy was walking in the woods when a bunny jumped out of the tree and said please i am pore and need money so i can by food for my family.But this boy was very greedy and was very rich so he said NO and kept walking.later when the boy grew up he was very pore.He went to the woods and told the bunny he was sorry and asked if he could have some money.the bunny grew up being really rich and wise.then he said ill give u 100 dollars.so Tommy went shopping and got a TV.and was very pore again.
I like your story baby, real cute. I see you understand the importance of saving, way to go!! Now let's work on your puncuation.
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